Sunday, February 14, 2010

Group Collaboration Paragraph

In my paragraph I have my intro start talking about the characters using deception to get what they want so, Michael, if you could tie that in to your conclusion it would be great.

I use CDs about the character's reactions and uses of deception on page 50, 80 and 88. I know we aren't overlapping so that is good. Michaela if you could mention how your small ways are used to pursue pleasure it would bring the essay together well.

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  1. Great,Jack that's what i was planning on dueing. Tieing the pursuit of pleasure from our thesis into my paragraph through the little things each character does dishonestly to reach their own personal happiness. Our concrete details are not the same so we are good there.

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